Naked now, with nothing but the Dragonstone hanging from her neck and long strands of blonde hair cascading over her breasts and hips, Kort drew in a tight breath.
“Beautiful.” Gently he cupped an ample breast and kissed Mia again. His other hand fluttered down the curve of her waist to her buttock, and he squeezed her tenderly, wanting to feel her sleek curves against his skin. She sighed his name in a breathy whisper, and arched her soft body against his chest. He nuzzled her pointed ear and when she gasped, she pressed her body to his. His royal blue aura sparked to life and zipped across his bare skin. “So beautiful, my Mia.”
Her hands went to work on his trousers. “Take these off,” she demanded, and loosened his belt, “because I’m dying to see you too.”
OK, Warriors, what works for you from this weekend’s snippet from Chalvaren Rising?
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HAWT! Love it!
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Thanks, Dani.
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Nicely done. Total change of pace too. I like it.
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I’m with you, Daelyn – I was ready to see Kort and Mia encounter a certain change of pace too. Hey, this story is not all about Dragon wrangling. There’s so much love to be shared between them. They have a future dynasty to build together, and that means they need to make time to make little elves. The fun is in the getting there.
Thanks for your comment!!!
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I am so excited to check out this series. 😀
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I can’t wait to share it with you, Brooklyn Ann. Thanks for stopping by.
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Steamy scene! Love her bold last line. I’m sure he’ll comply. 🙂
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Karen,
Thanks so much for stopping by and retweeting the post. I think Kort may just like taking orders from Mia. 😉
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My mind speaks wonders of all the sex going on. WOW!
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Romance must be in the air this weekend, Charmaine. Glad Mia and Kort are in good company with the other snippets. Thanks for stopping by!
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Very nice. Your word choices are perfect for the scene you’ve created. I particularly like the use of, “demanded”, near the end.
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Thanks, JT. Mia’s no passive observer. She knows what she wants. So glad to see you here.
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Well done, honey!
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Thank you for stopping by, Christine. I’m glad you liked the snippet. It’s fun to see Mia and Kort finally getting around to the issue at hand amonst all the dragon-wrangling and wizard-stopping.
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I love the fact that she takes control and is impatient to see him! I love a woman who knows what she wants…..and apparently, he’s it!
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Thanks, Stacey! Mia definitely wants Kort. Forever and always.
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Sensual, taking their time, excellent excerpt!
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The build-up is key. Thanks for checking in, Veronica. Fantasy Romance is fun to write.
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I quite enjoyed that, Paula. Thank you for sharing!
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Kort’s coming into his own, Samantha. Thanks for stopping by.
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Whew! Now that was a lovely bit to read. I’m dying to see him naked too! Wonderful job, Paula! 🙂
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OMG! Thanks so much, Evelyn! I think everyone wants to see Kort naked now except Ed Hoornaert. (Blushes.)
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Very sensual. I love his royal blue aura. I want to see more of him too!
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Thanks, Alexis – that Kort Elias is one gorgeous elf.
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At least they are having a little fun this week. Good for them.
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Thanks, Linda. Yep. I thought it was time to show Kort & Mia engaged in some activities other than war. Glad you stopped by.
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I am shocked Paula, shocked, that Mia and Kort are being naughty! 😉
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I worried about your sensitivities, Ed, when I carved out the excerpt. Still, it’s clearly time for Mia and Kort to enjoy the “fruits” of their labor. 🙂
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Excellent description. I think the reader can feel the rush. Nicely done, Paula. 🙂
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Good to hear, Teresa. I’m glad the rush came across in the snippet. Thanks so much.
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Sensuous bordering on pure lust. Nice!
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Hi P.T. Mia and Kort definitely have it bad for each other, and this story’s not all about dragon-wrangling and taking wizards down. 🙂
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Great tender scene, definitely sets the mood (especially for a story called CHALVAREN RISING). Great snippet.
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Chelle,
I love the way your mind worked up that double entendre – it’s amazing to see the magic of a story worked through the eyes of a Reader. Thank you so much!
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Hot hot hot … but so nicely written!
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Thanks, Iris. I’m glad you stopped by.
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Wow! SEXY. Love it!
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Thanks, Tamara! I may be switching to a different story next week so I wanted to give everyone something to talk about.
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